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[[.:Takeshi:.]]

IMPROVEMENT REQUEST

Character Name and Link: Takeshi
Improvement: Shinigami to Vizard
Thread Links: Here
Reasoning: Because I want to
Extra Arguments: Its seven posts. Want more? I can give you more

[mazra]

Before we begin I need to make sure you understand something. If, after reading through your posts, I or another staff member feel that this is not enough to qualify for a Hollowfication you will be given ONE chance to fix this. If it is still lacking at that point one of two things will happen. Either you character will become a Hollow or your character will be killed (Since this is in the Rukongai the later is much more probable). If you understand this an accept it please post below.

Also can you make the font bigger please, I can't read it o.o

[[.:Takeshi:.]]

I herebyaccept this hollowfication risk. But I must ask that if I am in need of fixing that I get a valid and understandable answer. And I also take it that I am able to PM one of you for questions I might have??

and the font has been changed

[mazra]

Oh Dear, I'm sorry but it seems that your entire thread consists of first person point of view. On this site we use thrid person for everything but thoughts and quotes. This means that you will have to rewrite this thread. Also, you are one rank lower than what is accepted for hollowfication so until you have reached this level I am locking this this thread.