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Resolve
Oct 11, 2010 0:52:45 GMT -8
Post by Shinji Hirako on Oct 11, 2010 0:52:45 GMT -8
Name: Resolve
Type: Enhancement
Range: Self
Description: Allows the user to surround themselves in an Aura of light blue energy that increases there rank for the next 3 posts. This skill can only be used if they have a strong resolve against something that is going on and is a very draining ability. After the skill is used they will suffer from exhaustion and have all but 1/3 of there reiatsu drained. If they don't even have that much left, the user will instantly faint.
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Resolve
Oct 13, 2010 19:25:35 GMT -8
Post by Empty on Oct 13, 2010 19:25:35 GMT -8
"increases there rank for the next 3 posts." - should be 'their', also you dont specify the severity of the increase in rank
Can the effects stack atop one another? (If you use resolve in one post, again in the next and again in the next - have you three times the number of ranks as a single use gives?)
"if they have a strong resolve against something that is going on" - given that this exists in any situation if the member decides to write that the character is opposed to whatever is happening, this isnt really a clause so should be removed.
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